
I've a rather nasty little noir piece HERE
leave a comment on the story, let me know what you think.
Feedback on fiction is always nice.
January 31st - I've done it, gone the full month without a drink. I've smashed dry January. Do I feel proud of myself? Well, sort...
3 comments:
Very nice piece of writing.
Brief, brutal and to the point. It definitely got and kept my attention to the very end.
Reminds me a little bit of the Sopranos.
Great story - thanks for sharing! Really gripping conclusion. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Neat and atmospheric . . . though I personally prefer the lead character in a low-life v. low-lifes story to have the odd redeeming feature! Plenty of blood and thunder for sure.
Keith
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