Thursday, 5 March 2009

online fiction alert


I've a rather nasty little noir piece HERE

leave a comment on the story, let me know what you think.

Feedback on fiction is always nice.

3 comments:

G. B. Miller said...

Very nice piece of writing.

Brief, brutal and to the point. It definitely got and kept my attention to the very end.

Reminds me a little bit of the Sopranos.

Cullen Gallagher said...

Great story - thanks for sharing! Really gripping conclusion. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Anonymous said...

Neat and atmospheric . . . though I personally prefer the lead character in a low-life v. low-lifes story to have the odd redeeming feature! Plenty of blood and thunder for sure.
Keith

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