The Tainted Archive is proud to present, as part of the Wild West eMonday celebrations, Gun Justice by Edward A. Grainger and Chuck Tyrell:
Edward A. Grainger, aka David Cranmer, is a member of the Western Fictioneers and is editor/publisher of BEAT to a PULP. His work has appeared in Needle: A Magazine of Noir, Out of the Gutter, and Crimefactory, and his eBook Adventures of Cash Laramie and Gideon Miles is currently in the leading five of Amazon's Top Rated in Westerns. He can be found at www.davidcranmer.com.
Chuck Tyrell AKA Charles T. Whipple, an international prize-winning author. Whipple was born and reared
in Arizona’s White Mountain country only 19 miles from Fort Apache. He
won his first writing award while in high school, and has won several
since, including a 4th place in the World Annual Report competition, a
2nd place in the JAXA Naoko Yamazaki Commemorative Haiku competition,
and the first-place Agave Award in the 2010 Oaxaca International
Literature Competition.
GUN JUSTICE
by Edward A.
Grainger and Chuck Tyrell
1623 words
Cash Laramie
rode into Macyville with his badge in his pocket and revenge on his mind.
He’d ridden in
ahead of the man he was following, the man who’d shot Cash’s friend down in
cold blood. Brant Macy. And it was no coincidence the town’s name matched the
man’s.
Brant Macy.
Brash. Bold. Flashy grin. Hell with the ladies. Used to getting everything he
wanted. But not this time.
Cash dismounted
in front of Williams Merchantile on Main Street and wrapped Paint’s reins
around the hitching post. He climbed the steps to the boardwalk and turned to
watch Macy ride up the street. Cash leaned back against the front of the
general store, pulled a cheroot from his vest pocket, struck a Lucifer on his boot,
and puffed the smoke alight. His eyes never left Macy.
“How’s it going,
Ev.” Macy’s voice held a chuckle.
“Making out,
Brant, making out,” said a man loading a sack of grain into his wagon.
Cash blew a
cloud of smoke upward. Macy noticed him, and put a finger to his hat in
greeting and smiled. He reined his horse to the rail.
Cash Laramie’s
eyes followed the brazen young man as he sauntered up the boardwalk, then
angled across the street. The flat-crowned hat with its carefully curved brim.
The checkered shirt and red-and-white calfskin vest. The tooled buscadero gun
rig. The striped California pants tucked into calf-high boots. The
happy-go-lucky smile and friendly but condescending attitude. Everything about
Macy said “rich man’s son.” Cash pulled on the cheroot, let the blue smoke
trickle from between his lips, then started after Brant Macy. The young man
didn’t act like a killer, but Cash knew he was one.
People turned to
stare after Cash Laramie as he followed Macy. His iron-hard expression, black
hat and clothes, and no-nonsense gun rig with its blued .45 Peacemaker made
them take a step back. Perhaps they wondered why a gunman walked the streets of
a quiet town like Macyville. Cash ignored them, focusing attention on Macy.
The killer ruffled
the hair of a red-headed boy and gave him a penny, as if he were some kind of
feudal prince. A blond burst through the batwings of the saloon on the corner.
She threw her arms around Macy’s neck and kissed him full on the mouth. His
laugh echoed off the sides of the buildings lining the street. He whispered in
her ear. She giggled. Then her face sobered when she saw Cash Laramie in the
middle of Main Street. She said something to Macy, who shrugged and turned on
to Mill Street.
Cash looked at
the sign above the saloon. Bucket of Blood, it read. The quirk in the corner of
Cash’s lips might have been the beginnings of a smile. Get that bucket ready, he thought.
Macy lengthened
his stride, making for the big building at the end of Mill Street. Macy’s Grist
and Feed Mill, the sign said.
Just as Macy
reached the mill entrance, Cash pulled his Peacemaker and fired a shot in the
air.
The whole town
froze.
“You’re a
killer, Macy,” he said, his sharp-edged voice full of disdain. “I’ve come to
take you back to Cheyenne.”
“Where’s your
army,” Macy said, a sneer on his lips. “Ain’t no one taking me out of
Macyville, no one.”
Cash thumbed
back the hammer of his Peacemaker. “You’ll come. Or you’ll die,” he said.
Macy tipped his
head back and laughed. “Not likely,” he said.
Cash held the
Peacemaker on Macy as he walked down the middle of the street. Twenty feet from
Macy, Cash stopped, just as two men rushed from the front door of the mill.
Their resemblance left no doubt. Relatives of Brant Macy. One had to be his
father.
“I come to get
your boy,” Cash said. “He’s a thief and a killer. He’s wanted in Cheyenne.”
One man, an
older version of Macy, turned and said, “What is this, son? What have you
done?”
Macy simpered.
“Just having some fun up to Cheyenne, Pa. Nothing much.”
The father
frowned. “How much trouble, Brant?”
Macy indicated
Cash with a toss of his head. “That guy’ll tell you I killed a man. I did. But
he was just a sumbitchin’ injun. Ain’t nothing wrong with killing a redskin. He
was one of them who massacred General Custer, I’m sure.”
Cash pulled the
badge from his vest pocket with his left hand. The gun in his right remained
pointed at Macy’s belly. “U.S. Marshal,” he said.
“Shit,” Macy
said. “I know you. Cash Laramie. Raised by injuns, they say. More injun than
white, they say.”
“You’ll not get
out of this, Macy. Misun, the Sioux you killed, scouted for General Crook. Even
saved the general’s life. Got a medal. The job he had at that saloon kept his
wife and children from starving. And he was my brother. You’ll go to Cheyenne.
Or you’ll die. Your choice.”
“No injun
lover’s gonna take me outta my own town,” Macy roared.
Cash stood
motionless. He knew what the Macys saw. Cold blue eyes staring from under the
brim of a black Stetson pulled low. A flint arrowhead hanging from a leather
thong around his neck. Square jaw. Thin cheroot that no longer smoked. Colt
Peacemaker at the ready.
Then Cash put
the pistol back in its holster. “Even odds, Macy. You and yours against me.
What’ll it be?”
“Mr. Laramie,
I’m Avery Macy and this here’s my brother Mike. Brant’s my son, sir. Maybe we
can talk this over. What do you say?”
“He killed my
blood brother. No deal.”
“Shit, Avery.
The lawman ain’t gonna listen to good sense. He’s come for a killing.” Mike
Macy squinted at Cash, who stood in the center of Mill Street, feet spread
shoulder-wide, hands hanging naturally at his sides. He looked almost
nonchalant, but also seemed like a coiled spring.
“Spread out,”
Mike said, holding his voice to a loud whisper.
Macy took two
steps to the right, then moved even farther. Mike went to the left. Soon they
made a thirty-foot arc facing Cash.
Cash spit out
the cold cheroot. He turned his face right, then left, using his peripheral
vision to check for possible onlookers in the line of fire. There were none.
Avery spoke, his
voice trembling. “C’mon, now. Things don’t need to get out of hand. Let’s sit
down and talk.”
Cash stood stock
still, his eyes wide open, unblinking.
Mike Macy
couldn’t stand the tension. He went for his gun, but he was slow. Too slow by
far.
Cash drew, took
two quick steps to his left, and fired into Mike Avery’s chest. Avery’s arms
flew wide, and he fell over backwards, but Cash wasn’t watching. He’d already
shifted aim to Brant Macy who’d finally got his gun out. Again Cash
sidestepped, this time to the right, and Macy’s bullet whipped by his ear.
Cash’s Peacemaker roared and the bullet took Macy in the center of the
forehead, exiting through the back of his head in a cloud of blood and brain
matter. Macy dropped like an ear-shot hog.
“You. Killed.
My. Boy!” Avery Macy roared. He pulled the trigger of his Remington Navy
revolver as quickly as he could thumb back the hammer, but his anger spoiled
his aim. Bullets flew wild as Cash dropped to one knee and carefully put two
bullets into Macy’s chest. The patriarch of Macyville crumpled to his knees,
then fell on his face.
Cash ejected
spent shells from his Peacemaker and pushed new bullets into the cylinder.
People now lined
the sidewalk. Cash made a slow turn, holding his marshal’s badge high in the
air. “U.S. Marshal’s business,” he said. They stayed put.
Pistol in hand,
Cash strode over to look down at Brant Macy’s dead face. His eyes were open in
surprise, and a half sneer curled his dead lips.
“What’s going on
here?” The call came from down Main Street, and a pot-bellied town marshal
hurried around the corner.
Cash held up his
badge again. “U.S. Marshal,” he said. He pointed at Brant Macy. “Killed while
resisting arrest.”
“Oh,” the town
marshal said. “Nothing much for me to do, then, I reckon.”
“You can get
those men buried,” Cash said.
“Yeah. Better.”
The town marshal shuffled away.
Cash walked back
down Mill Street with people keeping pace on both sides. He turned onto Main
and stopped in front of the general store. As he reached for Paint’s reins, the
red-headed boy gave a shout.
“God damn you,
mister. God damn you. I swear. When I grow up I’m gonna hunt you down and kill
you like you killed Brant. I swear.” Tears ran down the boy’s freckled cheeks.
A woman in a light blue bonnet put her arms around the boy from behind. He
turned to wipe his face on her apron, then once again faced Cash.
Cash mounted Paint
and turned his head toward Cheyenne.
“I’m gonna kill
you, mister. I am.”
Cash rode out of
town, and the kid’s words followed him all the way to Cheyenne. Could he have
handled the situation differently? Could he have taken Macy alive? Maybe. But
then, Cash decided it didn’t matter.
Misun was his
blood brother. A word from Cash to the saloon owner had gotten Misun the job
that killed him. But no man, red or white, black or yellow, deserved to be shot
in the back. Cash wondered what Misun’s family would do now. He’d find out when
he got to Cheyenne.
Usually he felt
empty after killing a man, like taking a life took a little part of his own.
This time it felt right.
28 comments:
A great new addition to the Cash Laramie legend.
A bit more. The revenge plot is an old standard I never get tired of. I think it speaks to all of us, the inequities we face in our lives that we can't do anything about. We can vicariously live our own revenge in a well told story. And GUN JUSTICE is a well told story.
Enjoyed it. Blood revenge is the hottest to settle. Thanks.
Nice to see your blog and stories written by various writers. Pretty good writing.
An optimistic view of the west, where any man's life is worth the fury of vengeance. Almost makes it seem the west was more 'progressive' than the east (north or south).
Great pithy story and a good ending. The western short story is in good hands.
WELL DONE!!!
Les
A fine story. I got a little confused with the two Avery names but I enjoyed this one. The kid at the end sells it, though. I hope a dozen novels down the line, Cash meets up with that kid, when he's older and wiser.
Enjoyed it. Blood revenge is the hottest to settle. Thanks.
Ed Lynskey
A nicely polished little jewel. I think the best part for me, though, was the boy who says he's gonna kill Cash when he grows up. It suggests a much bigger story for a future time, and shows how violence can beget violence.
Excellent. I would love to see what happens when that kid is a little older and goes on the hunt for Cash. His words are haunting.
Nothing satisfies like a good ol' revenge/retribution story ... And, as others have noted, you just KNOW that kid is going to be showing up down the road some time in the future.
Tight, tough, terrific.
Keep 'em coming.
Persevere - WD
Nicely done. The action was vivid and clear, which is damn hard to do.
And do I detect a little fore-shadowing....?
Well told! I agree with Charles that the kid's promise of revenge is a good cliffhanger to hang out there.
I appreciate all the comments. All of you continue to support this character and I can't thank you enough. It means so much more than you will ever know. And special thanks again to Chuck Tyrell for making me look so good.
A vivid and engaging story. Excellent work. I particularly enjoyed the ending. I wasn't expecting that.
I agree with the other comments. A fine story and the ending is very effective. Excellent job all around!
I've always enjoyed stories about basically good guys who have been pushed to walk just outside the line, so this is of course a winner.
I'm a fan of David's westerns, his e book collection - Adventures of Cash Laramie and Gideon Miles is terrific, and like this story helps introduce the genre to a new audience. Well told, a fine addition.
I enjoyed all the hard edged description and details sprinkled throughout the story, I felt like I was transported back in time. Fantastic. I also thought it was smart how you made the reader doubt Macy's guilt at first with his good will exchanges with the town folk and red head kid. Cash was cold and determined, and for the first time I actually doubted him, which I don't know if that was intentional on your part or if any of the other readers felt that way, of course all that changed in the later dialogue exchange. Really enjoyed this. Thanks!
Great to see 2 of my favorite writers working together with a favorite character, Cash Laramie. The storytelling is clean and spare. Well done.
No artifice, just blood revenge, but not the thoughtless kind. Nicely done.
David-Your stories always read honorable and gentlemanly. I admire your ability to convey a sense of decency in any circumstance. The kid got was he deserved and no one would say otherwise.
that opening line is a real killer. grabbed me by the shirt.
Dave what a great experience. I really enjoyed reading it.
That was as quick and efficient as ripping off a bandaid--complete with nervy tension for the reader!
Great job!
I am totally humbled. I completely missed the mistaken name. Should have been Mike Macy, not Mike Avery. Avery is Brant Macy's father and Mike is his uncle. Both should have the same last name (I don't think Mike is Brant's mother's brother but you'd have to ask Ed Grainger.) Anyway, I stand corrected, and if Gary will do it, I suggest the mistaken Avery last name be replaced with Macy.
Done
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